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Old 20 Apr 2008, 17:42 (Ref:2182243)   #5
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I'm not trying to have a go at you Pro, so think of this as "constructive criticism"...

Normally a personal review, like your thread title suggests, is your take on the events, your favourite moments, your thoughts, etc. What you have essentially written is a record of everything we saw on the TV on Saturday and Sunday, with a small "blurb" of your opinions at the bottom. If this is what you were intending, then I commend you one your great peice of writing. However I think what you were trying to post and what you did post are two separate things.

Please take these comments on board in good faith, and I look forward to seeing your next installment (if you continue). And it's great to see you using proper grammar! Maybe there is a God after all!

Now I'm off to watch NASCAR.
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