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Hi ProRacer
I find it incredible that you can spell "unscathed", but not sponsor (sponser) or trophy (trophey) or....
Mate, you're obviously young, and you're obviously passionate for which I will never be critical, but if you submit a piece for opinion I can only be honest. My tips?
1) Learn about "F7" and "Shift F7"
2) Since it's quite a lengthy read as is, maybe consider doing a shorter review of each day, rather than a 3 day essay?
Whatever, keep the passion. You can't deny you have it in bundles!
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